RE: On The Road Again

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Hi Eric, I had a quick look at your refreshed website. It's slick, minimalistic, and loads fast.
What's the purpose of your website? Here's why I ask: You're sending people away from your page to Hive - see Blog.

  • Books: I would pull up your first book. Start with your newest release.
  • Poetry: You have amazing poems. Portray your favorite ones, include images, and add another menu that says "Services". I didn't expect to see your offer/pricing on the poetry page, hence the suggestion to add another page on the navbar.

Enjoy the road trip and more importantly, the sacred time with your loved ones.



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I really appreciate the great feedback, Krisz! I'll have to get working on sprucing up the site. I haven't had a bespoke poem commission in years since Google changed their search ranking. My site used to come up first when anyone searched "personalized poetry" or "bespoke poetry" because I'd been doing it online for so long but now it's buried. Thank you!

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